Review of Dead of Winter: Journeys, Pt 2, Penllyn by Teagan Riordain Geneviene

In Teagan’s second Journey, the story opens with the Watcher, a centuries old wise woman who sees a child of the lineage of Eriu– the surname of Emlyn and her dead mother Eirlys.  She also sees the White Wolf from Journey 1, identified as the Lost  White Brother who comes and goes across the Divide and the omen, Winter is Coming.

After this eerie prologue, the story re- focuses on Emlyn.  The author cleverly reveals each paper-thin layer allowing us to seep further into this complex twelve- year-old who can see the dead and talk to spirits.  For Emlyn, the veil between real life, visions, and dreams is permeable, causing her problems with her family, and the harsh world of the Brethren of Un’Naf who rule the Flowing Lands.

Because Emlyn is almost shunned by the community, with the aid of her thoughtless sister, Afanen Eriu and her odious brother-in-law, Dewydd,  she lives a lot in her own thoughts.  Her only friend is her teacher, Obsabide.  Obsabide’s niece,  is Zasha.  Zasha is a member of the “Deae Matres:  A society of women who travel the world, searching out and collecting knowledge.”

Emlyn’s father, Afon Faxon has made the unusual decision to take his daughter to  the neighboring village of Penllyn with him.  He needs to sell some of his well-regarded hard cider and pick up the wagon and ponies that he left on a previous visit.  He is supposedly taking Emlyn with him to learn how he sells his apple cider since she is being taught to keep his books.  However, Emlyn keeps wondering if this is the real reason she is going, rather than Afanen or Dewydd.

In addition to the fascinating characters like the Daea Matre’s equerries, Taijin from Bandahar who accompanies Zasha on her journey to catch up with the Daea Matres, and Gethin Gwilym “Equerry to the traveling group of Deae Matres, and horse whisperer”, there are  the horses themselves.  Each horse has a name and a personality that Teagan skillfully sketches out. Kiska, a sensitive white mare, is under the control of Zasha.  Firelance, Taijin’s, tall red gelding has an equine sense of humor She has hinted that Emlyn may get a horse of her own as the story progresses.

Penllyn is a market town and the influence of the Un’Naf is not as strong as it is in Llyn Combe.  It seems like many people are also interested in going to Penllyn including the Deae Matres.  What  draws them all there?  Is it because “Winter is coming?”

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Interview with author Teagan R. Geneviene

Teagan, blogger and author of the Delta Pearl a serialized steam-punk novel, is publishing a fantasy novel Dead of Winter on Saturday, January 2. This is an interview about her new book and her writing.

1)  When and why did you make the switch from this type of fantasy to the lighter fantasy of the Delta Pearl? 

I was an avid reader of fantasy, particular “high fantasy,” so that was the genre I chose when I first took writing seriously.  I’m actually surprised that I ever wrote anything else. 

When I made public, my “three things method of storytelling,” I let those reader things completely drive every aspect of that story.  It turned out to be a 1920s mystery.  My stories spontaneously evolved into the steampunk tales you’ve seen on my blog in recent years. (Universal link to The Three Things Serial Story )

2)  The harsh religious elders that forbid the education of girls reminds me a bit of the Handmaid’s Tale.  Did that  influence this tale at all?

No.  Back in 2014, I cut the cable cord with Comcast and network television. I never went back.  I don’t know when “The Handmaid’s Tale” was published.  Of course, I’ve seen some of the ads for the TV version.  However, I’ve never read it or watched it, or even investigated it.  You aren’t the only person to ask that question. I really should look into that story.

3)  You must have wanted to scream when Game of Thrones came out with your title, Dead of Winter.  You said you wrote 800 pages—have you edited the book back in the years since  you wrote it?  Did the break change what you wanted to do with the story?

I think I actually did scream.  I try to describe it in a funny way, but it really was hugely demoralizing.  I began to think I’d never finish the rest of the story… but I was determined.

No.  I did some editing right after I typed “the end” on the final page, but in my disappointment, I shelved Dead of Winter.  The story and the characters stayed with me, reminding me now and then that it was waiting.  Naturally I’m editing the “journeys” (the novelette-sized installments) now.  My writing style has evolved during the past decade. Plus, I’d never publish a work without intensive editing.

4)  You really weave geography into your story.  Do you draw maps of your world before or as you create them?  Whereas the Delta Pearl seems Mississippi River and tributaries centric, this one seems like it is straight from the British Isles.

No.  Although I’ve always wished I had one of those marvelous maps you find in high fantasy stories!  I love those things.  I tried, ten years ago to make one, but I didn’t get very far.  Maybe that will be a new creative project for me.

The Delta Pearl, may or may not be on our earth.  It may or may not be a parallel world. It just is.  I’ve never specified where it is.  Dead of Winter is pure fantasy.  It is not set in our world.  However, it looks and sounds a lot like parts of our world.  Something I picked up from studying the work of Robert Jordan, David Eddings, and Terry Brooks is that making a place similar to one with which the reader is already familiar, causes the reader to automatically flesh-out the imagery.  That way, the author doesn’t have to bog down the storytelling with excessive descriptions.

5)  You have written a number of  pieces, as listed on the front of Dead of Winter.  Do you have a favorite among your writings?

Oh… I never really thought of it that way.  Hmmm…  (Ha! Can you imagine dozens of characters in my head right now, all clamoring for me to say their story is my favorite?)  I definitely have some favorite characters.  A couple of them are in novels that are still waiting for me to finalize them.

The Dead of Winter overall manuscript is filled with over 300 characters and places.  All those names were from my research.  I’ve put a list of them at the end of the first novelette – Journey 1, Forlorn Peak.  That list will grow with each new journey.  Anyhow, several of those characters are dear to me.  I had quite a crush on one named Ta’jin.  He won’t come into the story until later.

6) What is your favorite part of writing—first draft, editing, adding graphics, marketing?  What do you dislike the most of the whole process?

My favorite part of writing is “world building,” developing the world of the story.  That includes thorough research.  Fantasy stories warrant dedicated research, just like any other genre.  Unfortunately, world building has little to do with creating the plot.  That’s probably my downfall.  I make a world, fall in love with it, and then worry about the plot.

7)  I am fascinated with your use of the white wolf.  

“The wolf is an ongoing mystery in the overall story. However, that is as much as I can reveal about it right now.  That would be a huge spoiler.”

8)  You have an affinity for the whole punk genre from diesel to steam.  Do you have a favorite era that you would prefer to write about or a favorite area of the world that you would like to explore with your writing?  I don’t think this is a punk genre—is that an accurate guess?

That’s right, Dead of Winter is high fantasy, not any sort of punk.  It’s a non-technology world, pre-industrial.

Pair of Horses from Dreamstime

However, you’re also correct that I enjoy writing punk in its various forms.  I’m a research geek.  The retro-futuristic technologies that are a common element in punk stories give me hours and hours of research and exploration fun.  As I learn about the tech, I’m inspired with more details for the stories.

 9)  You mention the Deae Matres, as being a society of women who travel the world, in search of knowledge.  Could they really be… Are the Deae Matres actually…

Yes, Pat. The Society of Deae Matres are the librarians of Dead of Winter.

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Reblog: Book Review of the Photographer of the Lost

Britain made the decision not to repatriate the bodies of servicemen killed on the Western Front. Instead, the families would be sent a photograph of the grave marker. Denzil’s book review, The Photographer of the Lost by Caroline Scott, covers this, in addition to the story of a widow who receives a photo of her husband looking older than the last time she saw him. The photo arrives in an envelope with a smudged date stamp and no other information. To find out more, click here.

The Horse Museum

Dr Suess's Horse Museum

I’ve often said there is nothing better for the inside of the man, than the outside of the horse. Ronald Reagan

When you look at a horse what do you see?    We may all look at a horse but we may see different things.  Do you see color, lines, breeds, purpose, history, mythology, religion?  Dr. Seuss’s  Horse Museum takes us on a tour of how different artists portray their visions of what a horse is through the medium of art.

Horse Museum is a Dr. Seuss book released by Random House Children’s Books on September 3, 2019. It is based on an unfinished manuscript by Theodor Seuss Geisel completed by Australian illustrator Andrew Joyner.  250,000 copies were released from the first printing.

Following the 1991 death of Geisel, his wife Audrey Geisel and assistant Claudia Prescott cleared his office, donating the bulk of his unpublished works to the University of California, San Diego and archiving a few others in a box. In October 2013, they examined the manuscripts and sketches contained in the box, finding a folder marked “Noble Failures” of uncategorized drawings, a more complete project titled The Pet Shop which was later completed and released as What Pet Should I Get?, illustrations for flashcards and a collection of sketches titled The Horse Museum.

The unfinished manuscript was about 80% complete and was accompanied only by rough sketches but not any completed original artwork by Geisel.

The book contains a colophon with a publisher’s note explaining background information about the book, including the discovery of the manuscript and associated sketches, artists and artworks depicted in the book, Geisel’s interest in art, and Joyner’s approach to illustration.

February 25 – Honoring Katherine Johnson — from Celebrate Picture Books

Katherine Johnson, a mathematician extraordinaire and savior of Apollo 13, passed away yesterday. This is a wonderful book review of a children’s picture book written about it.

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If you’ve read the book, “Hidden Figures,” by Margot Lee Shetterly, or have seen the movie, Katherine Johnson was one of the featured “human computers!” In addition to the children’s book below, a picture book of “Hidden Figures” is also available. Such amazing women!       ~Becky

Katherine Johnson passed away yesterday at the age of 101. Recognized from an early age for her brilliance, Katherine went on to become a pivotal mathematician for NASA as the space race led to the first manned missions and lunar landings. She continued working for NASA on the space shuttle and other […]

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Book Review: I Heard the Bells on Christmas Day

Very few of us know the original verses of this Civil War-era poem by Henry Wardsworth Longfellow.  He wrote the words in 1864 after the Civil War had raged for three years.  Lincoln had barely won his second presidential election. Longfellow had recently lost his beloved wife, Fanny.  His elder son had been severely wounded while serving with the Union Army.   For several months he had been unable to write any poetry and that also weighed heavily upon him.

“Christmas Bells”

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(The original poem, complete with all seven stanzas)

“I heard the bells on Christmas Day
Their old familiar carols play,
And wild and sweet
The words repeat
Of peace on earth, good-will to men!

And thought how, as the day had come,
The belfries of all Christendom
Had rolled along
The unbroken song
Of peace on earth, good-will to men!

Till, ringing, singing on its way,
The world revolved from night to day,
A voice, a chime
A chant sublime
Of peace on earth, good-will to men!

Then from each black accursed mouth
The cannon thundered in the South,
And with the sound
The carols drowned
Of peace on earth, good-will to men!

It was as if an earthquake rent
The hearth-stones of a continent,
And made forlorn
The households born
Of peace on earth, good-will to men!

And in despair I bowed my head;
“There is no peace on earth,” I said;
“For hate is strong,
And mocks the song
Of peace on earth, good-will to men!”

Then pealed the bells more loud and deep:
“God is not dead; nor doth he sleep!
The Wrong shall fail,
The Right prevail,
With peace on earth, good-will to men!”

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Book Review: Resistance Women by Jennifer Chiaverini–Part II

Resistence WomenAs I read this book, I am repeatedly struck with how apt the words of the characters in 1930’s Germany could apply today by changing the country and political parties.  The book is written in 2019 so one would have to draw one’s own conclusions on how concidental the remarks are.

p15 (1929)   “Mildred knew that Germany was not perfect, that like the United State it grappled with various economic, political, and social problems….”  Mildred is an American, married to a German national and has joined her husband in Germany.  (She and her husband are  based upon real people.) Mildred is studying for a doctorate in American literature and is trying to find a job as a professor at a time when the Nazi’s are coming to power.

p42-43  (Oct 1930) “People are struggling,” Sara replied…..”They can’t find work and they’re afraid of what the future holds.” Sara  is Jewish and a student of Mildred’s.  Sara’s family is well off–her father is a banker. Her brother Natan is a reporter and an editor for an important Berlin newspaper.  They hope that their relative wealth and generations of being German will keep them safe in the future.

Natan’s response to Sara, “Then comes along this loud, angry man  promising to take them back to a mythical golden age of prosperity, swearing to punish Germany’s enemies for wrongdoing them.  Some peple respond to that–in this case, vast numbers of people.”

p50  “Women and Jews–what threat do we pose to those men, that they call for our deaths?”  Amalie, Sara’s sister, and married to  well-off Christian who is an officer in the Wehrmacht, is lamenting what has happened in public after the “results of September 14 election had stunned everyone–except perhaps the leader of the Nationalsozialistische Deutsche Arbeiterpartei, an Austrian named Adolph Hitler. ”

Following the election, there was a riot in Berlin.  p52, “..(N)one of the roughly 300 protesters had been arrested, less surprised to read that most of the windows broken had belonged to businesses owned by Jews.”

“And though there was not a word of truth to it, the National  Socialist press spread the rumor  that the Communists had started the riot.  They proclaimed the lie so often and so emphatically that those who had not seen the riot for themselves could not distinguish truth from falsehood.”

p63 (1931), Dr. Kienle, a prominent female gynocologist, tries unsuccessfully to give a speech in Marburg,  The Nazi brownshirts disrupt her speech by proclaiming a woman’s role “Kinder, Kirche Kuche!”–Children, church, kitchen.  “Mildred knew then that outspoken, independent women made up one more class of undesirables that must be suppressed if the Nazis were to remake Germany in their own image.”

p189 (1933) “Rational people,” said Mildred.  “People who act out of decency, compassion, and respect for the rule of law rather than hatred and fear.  That is the real Germany, not that frenzy of lies we saw yesterday.”


Book Review: Resistence Women by Jennifer Chiaverini, Part I

The latest book by New York Times best seller author Jennifer Chiaverini, is set in Germany from the waning days of the Wiemar Republic through Adolph Hitler’s legal rise to power, where his Nationalist Social party changes Germany from a democratic republic to a dictatorship. It culminates with World War II.

The Resistence Women are based upon  three real women and a fictitional Jewish woman who make up a group opposing Hitler and the rise of the Nazi regime. Mildred Fish-Harnack, a University of Wisconsin graduate student in American Literature goes to Germany in 1929 to be with her German born husband, brilliant economist Arvid Harnack, who she had met and married in the United States.  Mildred is trying to finish her doctorate, while seeking a position as a professor in a German university.  Greta Lorke, a friend of Mildred and her husband Arvid  from the University of Wisconsin, returns to Germany in 1930 to find that that 1929 stock market crash has severely affected the already struggling German economy.  Greta is also trying to finish her dissertation and is seeking a position as a writer in the theater.  Martha Dodd,  the daughter of the new American ambassador to Germany and also an author, meets Mildred through the American Women’s Club.  Sara Weitz, one of Mildred’s students in American Lit, is the only fictional character.  She is from a well-off Jewish family and represents a composite character of some of the Jewish members of the resistence cell.

The four women and their partners are drawn into an underground espionage network, where imprisonment and possible death are the most likely outcomes whether one is German, American, gentile or Jew.  Anyone who is not a fervent Nazi is an enemy of the Reich.

However, the Nazi’s are not the only ones who practice anti-semitism and the perception that Mildred and Arvid are Communist sympathizers (in the post WWII Cold War era)  lead to the story not getting the attention it might otherwise have recieved.

Book Review: Ban This Book

Ban-This-Book-Cover-1650px-680x1020Although Banned Book Week has passed, this chidren’s book by Alan Gratz is a remarkable book about how Amy Anne came to run the Banned Book Locker Library.

Amy Anne’s favorite book, From the Mixed-up Files of Mrs. Basil E. Frenkwiler by E.L. Konigsburg, is banned from her school library by classmate’s mom who decides it is inappropriate for children to read.    As the school year continues, other favorite books are banned.

As the titles are banned, Amy Ann and some of her classmates decide to get copies of the banned books by any means possible.  Shy, quiet Amy Ann becomes the defacto librarian of this underground library, checking copies of banned titles in and out of her school locker.

The group’s two biggest fears are how to keep acquiring titles as the list continues to grow and what will happen when/if news of the Banned Book Locker Library leaks out.  As more children learn about the Library, the chance for exposure grows with each check-out.

In the battle of book censorship and who has the right to tell kids what they can or can’t read, the children find themselves on the front line dealing with  the school bureaucracy and parental hipocracy.  The school librarian also had to decide what is right, not just what is legal.  (They are not always the same.)

Rating:  4/5 Stars

Ban This Book by Alan Gratz. New, York:  McMillan, 2017. 765385562

Available on Kindle, Hardbook, Paperback, and MP3CD


One Town, Thirty-Four National Guards Men, Nineteen Killed in One Day…

DSC00510.JPGOne Memorial = One town, thirty four National Guardsmen with nineteen killed in a single day plus four more killed during the rest of the Normandy campaign.

That is how the National D-Day Memorial came to Bedford, Virginia.  Bedford, a small town near the Blue Ridge Mountains in central Virginia,  had a population of about 3,200 then. (Population has doubled to slightly over 6,000 today).  Bedford proportionally lost more of its population than any other town.

Known as the Bedford Boys, Company A of the 116th Infantry Regiment was part of the 29th Division.  Most of them had joined the Guard to earn extra money during the Great Depression.   They were mobilized into the Army for what was initially supposed to be one year on February 3, 1941.

They spent most of 1941 training at Ft Meade in Maryland.  After Pearl Harbor, they relocated to Camp Blanding, near Jacksonville, Florida.  From Camp Blanding, they went to Manhattan before embarking on the Queen Mary for Scotland and England.

They spent almost two years in Great Britain, training for the probable invasion of Europe.  Even though the troops did not experience combat before D-Day, they were among the best-trained soldiers and were selected to head the first wave of attack on Omaha Beach on June 6, 1944.

To read more about the Bedford boys, I highly recommend,  The  Bedford Boys:  One American’ Town’s Ultimate D-Day  Sacrifice by Alex Kershaw.  Cambridge, MA:  Da Capo Press, 2003.  ISBN 0306811677

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Book Review: Over the Horizon

Over the HorizonOver the Horizon by Luke Ridenhour.  Createspace Independent Publishing Platform, 2018

Over the Horizon is heartwarming, fictionalized account of the USS Midway’s 1980-1981 cruise.  The story is told through the focus of the officers of VA-115 Eagles, who fly A-6 Intruders off the Midway. The reader is the 3rd person in the cockpit along with the pilot and the bomber-navigator (BN) from preflight briefs, through catapult takeoff and tail hook landing, and the long hour’s in-between.

The reader experiences why a lucky pilot is one whose takeoffs equal his landings. He doesn’t want to dick the donkey. Such irreverent observations are a way to cope with the reality that a single mistake can be the loss of a friend. “Although one pilot, three enlisted men, and four airplanes would not be coming home, the cruise was deemed a success.  Acceptable losses for such an at-sea period were defined as five aircraft loss or significantly damaged, three fatalities involving aviators, and three fatalities involving non-aviators.” (p.251).

The book follows a pivotal year for the USS Midway.  The Cactus collision and a potentially hazardous flyby of the Soviet aircraft carrier Minsk are two of the dramatic highlights.  The officers of VA-115 also face personal highs and lows from a break-up with a girlfriend that cannot handle the strains of the life and death situations that aviators face daily, a divorce from a wife who can no longer deal with the prolonged separations for people serving with the Navy’s foreign legion as the Midway was also known, and unlikely lifelong friendship with Eli, a Filipino caddy at the golf course in Subic Bay who understood that you “can’t argue with God about wind, rains and storm, or why you can’t teach a monkey to meow.”  (p. 233)

The friendships of the people in this story will stay with the reader long after the story ends.  Everyone is a wonderful human being.  Even the sailors on liberty in Olongapo (the adult Disneyland) show remarkable restraint except for the very few that throw pesos away from the children who dive into the Shit River for the tossed coins.  The better among the people who cross over the Shit River Bridge between the Subic Naval Base and Olongapo throw the coins near the children or the nets they carry. It is like a band of Eagle Scouts rather than the variety of flawed human beings that one normally finds in a group of individuals.  All of the Filipino children are precious, all of the Filipinos are friendly and have wonderful smiles despite the Americans on the golf course spending more in a day than that Filipinos make in a week.  Where do we find such friendly, pleased with their lot in life people?

Midway Magic is a constant theme through the story.  It helps save the ship from damage during the Cactus collision.  It also explains the luck experienced by the various pilots and crew as they perform their intricate, death defying ballet when the night is darker than a “black horse’s ass” and the flight deck is freezing.

Over the Horizon is another theme.  Pilots live to see what’s over the horizon.  Eli, the Filipino caddy, dreams of someday seeing over the horizon “the mystical line where the water meets the sky.  His dream was in full view every day—less than twenty miles away—yet out of reach for a life time, he had finally conceded.” (p. 19)

I would like to read more about life on the Midway as interpreted by those that served on her.  It is a time that has passed, but is evergreen for those who love a good sea story that either begins “This is a no shitter,” or “There I was on the…”  Let us end as one the flyers, Doc, is known to say, “Yes and Amen.”



Book Review: Encourage a Child to Watch Birds, by Denzil Walton

Most of us have birds somewhere in our lives (in the garden, divebombing the car, feeding from our feeders, or hanging out and talking in the early morning hours.)  They are fascinating and most of us don’t know as much about as we might.  Audrey Driscoll’s review of Denzil Walton’s new book can help you learn more about birds.

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What to Read for the 150th Anniversary of “Little Women”

I first read Little Women when I was a rising 4th grader, visiting my cousins in Cape Cod.  (It was just a coincidence that I was in Massachusetts when I first read the book, but it seems appropriate.) I loved the book.  I was combination of the sisters: the oldest like Meg, a wannabe writer like Jo, could play at the piano like Beth, and wanted to be an artist like Amy (but alas that art talent went to my sister, Helen.)  Since then I re-read the books every decade or so.  Now that I can read all of Louisa May Alcott’s books on Project Gutenberg I can read them whenever I want. Mirabile Dictu has done her usual fantastic job of putting this annotated bibliography of books about Louisa May Alcott.  I have also heard that Hollywood is making at 21st century version of the story.  Not sure if it will do honors to the original (probably not.)

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